My grandson’s dentist appointment was after school which meant dealing with rush-hour traffic. While sitting on the overpass waiting for the light so I could turn onto the expressway ramp, I could look down to gauge the usual traffic bottleneck. Bad news. Traffic was completely stopped. I said, “We’re going for a little ride to avoid the expressway.”
“Ok.”
I wound my way around side streets going north and west.
I heard from the backseat, “I have no idea where we are!”
After two more turns he saw familiar buildings. “You weren’t lost after all Grandma? I was worried.”
In response to Charli Mills August 30, 2018, prompt at Carrot Ranch Literary: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about a bottleneck. You can be literal or use the term to describe congestion. Go where the prompt leads.
09/01/2018 at 05:28
Grandma knows the best! Well done Susan. 🙂
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09/01/2018 at 05:51
Nicely done, Sue. T didn’t realize until today that it had to be precisely 99 words. That makes this writing exercise I greater challenge than I thought. So, I repeat. Nicely done.
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09/01/2018 at 06:42
Thanks Rick. It’s fun to meet the challenge.
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09/04/2018 at 22:51
A great use of a bottleneck, Sue.
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