While visiting Tyrell’s parents’ beautiful remote home, Tessa spotted the abandoned house almost hidden by trees. Tyrell offered to take her to see it.
As they entered, Tessa noticed the faded fancy blue dress hanging by a window.
Tyrell said, “Mama tells my Grandma was to wear that to wed her beau, but another migrant killed him in a knife fight about who was to be boss. Grandma died soon after, so my Mama, already a young girl, hung that dress there to be a reminder to break the family cycle of poverty and violence. You’re witnessing her success.”
Note: Tyrell is the African-American drummer in Michael’s band
Written in response to Charli Mills August 8, 2022, prompt at Carrot Ranch Literary: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about “the one who left the dress.” A 1940s-era dress still hangs in an abandoned house. Who left it and why? You can take any perspective and write in any genre. It can be a ghost story. Or not. Go where the prompt leads!
08/13/2022 at 20:35
I like the image of the dress standing vigil and holding the stories for this family.
keep em coming Sue!
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08/15/2022 at 17:11
Thanks, Dede. In rural New York State, the migrants, shacks, and fights were a regular part of my childhood. Mechanization has taken away the potatoe pickers, but the fruit tree harvests are still done by hand.
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08/18/2022 at 20:07
Cool story!
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08/20/2022 at 08:07
Thanks , Liz.
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